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My character lives in Medellin and his name is Pablo. He likes to go to rock concerts with his friends. Pablo is 24 years old and lives with his mom and his dog Bruno. He doesn't like to watch T.V; he prefers going to the park and walking his dog.
Pablo's favourite dish is Bandeja paisa and he also loves Sancocho. He drinks natural juice and lemonade. On weekdays, he works in a school until 1 p.m and then he goes to the gym and he always has dinner with his mom. On weekends, he spends time with his mom and his dog and he sometimes go to the library or the stadium.
That's all folks, see you!
ResponderEliminarMy character lives in Bogotá and his name is Mateo . He likes to play soccer with his friends.
Mateo is 26 years old and live with his wife and his dog mike. He doesn’t like to eat soup,
He prefers eat meat.
Mateo’s favorite dish is pizza and the meat. He drinks natural juices on the week.
He works that a architect and In the afternoon he go to the gym.
On weekend he go to the park with his dog Mike.
lives* with his wife and his dog Mike*.
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Mateo's favorite dish is pizza and the*(delete) meat
He works as* an architect
He goes* to the gym/to the park.
my character lives in Bogota and her name is Ana.she likes to dance.Ana is 20 years old and lives with yours brothers and her pet. she doesn't like to play in the park . Ana study in a university, she likes to study. Ana like to eat an ice cream. she want to lives in france and buy a big house in the center of france.on weekends Ana eat a hamburguer or a hot dog.She drinks water or natural juices. In a week she works in a restaurant at the morning and she studies at afternoon.
ResponderEliminarAna likes to do exercise, she go to the gym every tuesday at the morning.
Ana go to dance class every friday at the night , she go to dance 4 hours a week.
and so Ana's week routine ends
My*
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lives with her* brothers
Ana studies*
Ana likes* to eat an*(delete) ice cream
She wants* to live* in France*
Ana eats* a hamburger*
On weekdays*
In*the morning/afternoon
Ana goes*
At the*(delete ) night
My character is Emmasaurus,she is a dinosaur and she is from colombia but,she lives in United States.Emma is 19 years old,and she likes the burritos, pizza and tacos.
ResponderEliminarHer favorite band is Queen,and she lives with her family and her pet that´s empanada.
Her favorite food is hamburguer,she is a makeup artist and she works in weddings,15 parties etc.
She goes to the class art every days and gymnastics class too.
She loves her family and she is very happy.❤
Colombia*
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ESTRELLA DEL MAR GONZALEZ PAEZ
ResponderEliminarMy character lives in Bogota and her name is Emma.She is 18 yers old,she likes to sing and skate,she lives with her mother,her father and her bird Sky.She doesn't like the hamburguer.Her favourite dish is toast with eggs,and she loves the pineapple juice.On the weekend she goes to the gym in the morning,and in the afternoonshe goes to fencing clases.On the week she study in the university,from 6 am to 3 pm.And sometimes she likes to go to swim.
Years* old
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She loves pineapple juice*
She studies* at the University
She likes to go swimming.
Very well done, Estrella!
Keep on that way!
Years old
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She loves
She studies
At the university
Swimming
my character lives in london her name is eric he is 20 years old after he lives in london he lived in bogota he need trains all his live to gets where he is .
ResponderEliminarhe is fottball player he plays in manchester unaited , he likes to trains all the days because he wants to be the best of the world he in te afternoon stays with her wife and his sons he nows 3 languages because then to train he studys her favorite food is a italian salad and water he always gets up at 6:00
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- years old. After he lives
-fottball/football
-unaited/united
- likes to trains/likes to train
-of the world he.../world. He
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-her/his
-he nows/he knows
you had some mistakes especially in the capital letters with the S and other words.
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Eric*
Before living in London, he lived in Bogotá*
life*
to get*where he is.
He is a football player, and plays in Manchester United.
He stays with his*wife, and his sons in the afternoon. He speaks* 3 languages because after* training, he studies. His* favorite food is Italian* saladand water. He always...
Daniel, pay attention to punctuation and capitalization.
NICOLE NATALIA BARRETO TELLEZ
ResponderEliminarmy character is called happy, is a blue cat that has wings and is small, is of Japanese origin but lives in South Korea. Happy is very happy and is 21 years old, likes ramen and likes to play video games.
his favorite music is kpop and covers, he lives alone with his friend who is a bear in an apartment next to a lake.
his hobbi is painting with watercolors and playing videogames, and his profession is an artist.
every day he goes to GYM, and he loves to be with him
My*
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His* favorite music...
Hobby*
Everyday* he goes to the* gym, and they love to be together*
My character live in Paris and her name is Sofia.she is 17 years old,she likes play basketball ,she lives with her mom,father and your brother.she doesn´t like the cheese and papaya,her favorite dish is Burger with mango juice ,and she love the dogs .on the weekend she goes to walk with my friend liza.in the afternoon she goes to the university from 8pm in the morning until 5pm in the evening then I go home and on weekends I go to the movies or I'm at a dinner with my family
ResponderEliminarliveS/capital letter She/loveS/capital letter on/capital letter in/then piriut/piriut/piriut final.
EliminarMy character lives in Paris and her name is Sofia .She is 17 years old , she likes to play basketball,she lives with her mom, father and your brother. She doesn´t likes the cheese and the papaya , her favorite dish is burger with mango juice , and she loves the dogs.On the weekend she goes to walk with my friend Liza.In the afternoon she goes to the university from 8 AM in the morning until 5 PM in the evening then Sofia goes to home and on weekends She usually goes to the Cinema Or sometimes she goes to dinner with her family.
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My character lives in París and her name is Sofía. She is 17 years old, she likes play basketball, she lives with her mom, her father and her brother. She doesn't like the cheese and the papaya,Her favorite dish is burguer with mango juice, she loves the dogs.
EliminarOn the weekends she walk with her friend Liza. In the afternoon she goes to the university from 8am on the morning until 5pm un the evening then, Sofía goes home.
On weekends she usually goes to the cinema or sometimes she goes to eat with her family.
It is the correction.
Her* brother
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She loves the*(delete) dogs.
Hey Sharon, check your classmates' corrections and mine to revise your text. Good job, though.
My character lives in italy and his name is gerardo. he is 20 years old,he lives with his cat and his dog.he likes play pokemon zafiro,but he doesn´t like eat salad.
ResponderEliminargerardo works in a restaurant,he likes pizza and he plays soccer in the afternoons,he loves see action films and read cience fiction books.and his favorite pokemon is kyogre
Italy*
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He* likes to play...
He doesn't like to* eat salad.
He loves to* see...
... science* fiction books, and his favorite Pokémon is...
Capital letter= Italy/Gerardo.
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After writing punctuation marks leave a space=he is 20 years old,he live…/He is 20 years old, he live…
Final point.
My character lives in Sydney and Her name is Emma. She is 19 years old, she lives with her sister and with her mother. She likes the Harry Potter's books, draw, play basketball, play the piano and she Likes kpop.
ResponderEliminarShe is studing graphic design and she works like a waitress in a restaurant. In Her free time she likes to go to the beach and talk with her friends.
The Emma's favorite food Is the pizza, the chocolate and the lulo juice. Her favorite movies are the saga of "Harry Potter" and "hidden talents". She doesnt like the videogames, she hate it.
I consider that you don´t have mistakes
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her*
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She is studying*
she works as* a waitress
The*(delete) Emma's favorite food is the* pizza (delete all "the" in this sentence)
She doesn't like the*(delete) video games, she hates* them*.
You had a few mistakes, check them. Good job, though!
My character lives in Norway, Oslo, he is a ice cream men and his name is Tyler, Hi has a lot of pets; Dogs, cats, birds... He likes so much videogames and run in the morning whit his pets everyday.
ResponderEliminarMISTAKES
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HI has a lot
RUNS in the morning
...a lot of pets: dogs*
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Whose post is it? What is your name?
Mi character lives in New york her name is Angelica, she works in an office and she is a big merchant, she normaly travels because she do conferences, she speak many languages as french,arab and others, she lives with her best friend and his name is Leo, she likes more do gimnastics and her hobby is dance.Her favorite food is the pasta,she does not like the math because has to more to memorize,she has a pet an is a dot, that is a Pastor Aleman,his name is Martin.
ResponderEliminarSara Aguirre.
My character lives in New York, her name is Angelica, she works in an office and she is a big merchant, she normally trevels because she do conferences. She speaks many languages as French, Arab and others. She lives with her best friend and his name is Leo. She likes gymnastics and her hobby is dance. Her favourite food is pasta. she doesn't like maths because in that subject she has to get memorize a lot of numbers. She has a pet, it is a Pastor Aleman, his name is Martin.
Eliminarher hobby is dancing
EliminarGerman Shepherd.
Well done, Sara. Check Paula's correction as well as mine. However you did not have many mistakes. Good job!
My character is Jhan he is a junkie ,but his mom loves him she want help her soon,also she give him a good life and a good work because she want her soon became in a important lawyer in a company.
ResponderEliminarHe is ugly,his hair is large and black his eyes are blue and he is very intelligent but he does not use his intelligence .He is 23 years old .His favorite drug is pooper for this reason ,he faster deterioration.
He studied in a important university,he become in a important lawyer,before he entered in drugs a bad person give him drugs .Her loves his pet it is a pretty cat call Lucy.He lived in the bronx but, now he live in the center of bogota and his life is very sad because her mom is vey sick.And he want became for help his mom.
MARIA JOSE PULIDO LOPEZ.
My character is Jhan he is a junkie, but his mom loves him, she want help him soon, also she give him a good life and a good work because she want him soon became in a important lawyer in a company.
EliminarHe is ugly, his hair is large and black his eyes are blue and he is very intelligent but he does not use his intelligence. He is 23 years old, His favorite drug is Pooper because it makes faster deterioration.
He studied in a important university, he become in a important lawyer, before he entered in drugs, because a bad person give him drugs .He loves his pet that is a pretty cat called Lucy.He lived in the Bronx but, now he live in the center of Bogota. His life is very sad because her mom is vey sick. And he want to help his mom.
My character is Jhan he is a junkie ,but his mom loves him she wants help her soon,also she gives him a good life and a good work because she want her soon became in a important lawyer in a company.
EliminarHe is ugly,his hair is large and black his eyes are blue and he is very intelligent but he does not use his intelligence .He is 23 years old .His favorite drug is pooper for this reason ,he faster deterioration.
He studied in a important university,he become in a important lawyer, before he entered in drugs a bad person give him drugs. Her loves his pet it is a pretty cat call Lucy. He lived in the bronx but, now he lives the center of bogota and his life is very sad because her mom is vey sick.And he want became for help his mom.
She wants* to* help her son*
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his hair is long*
His* fast* deterioration
before he went into*drugs
He became* a lawyer
A bad person gave* him drugs
His* mom is very sick.
Well done! Check your classmates comments and mine as well.
NICOLE NATALIA BARRETO TELLEZ
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THE BEST VACATION
ResponderEliminarmy character is fabian ,he is 14 years old he lives in Bogotà .
He likes play soccer with her cousin he also likes lisent to music .He like eat hamburguer her mom is the best teacher of English ,he has a dog that is called Ricardo is white ,He play with her dog while that her mom work he think that are the best vacation the world
NAYLEEN CHOCONTA
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My character is Fabian,he has 14 years old,he lives in Bogota.
He likes play soccer with her cousin,he also likes listen to music.He likes eat hamburger,his mom is the best teacher of English,he has a dog that is called Ricardo he is white,he plays with his dog while that his mom works,he thinks that are the best vacation in the world.
Sara Aguirre
He likes to* play soccer/to* listen to music/to* eat hamburgers.
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While that*(delete) his mom ...
He thinks that this* is the best vacation.
Well done, Nayleen. Take a look at Sara's comments and mine as well.
My character is Emma, que is a girl, que is 17 years old,she lives in Madrid,she was born in Barcelona,she live with her mom and her brother,her best friene is Farrok,she like listen trap,reggaeton,pop and english music and her favorites colors are white,pink anda black.
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Que/who
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and her brother. Her best friend...
she likes to listen to trap*
English*
Favorite*
Make the corrections and write your name on the post, please.
MISTAKES :
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*she is 17 years old
*lives with her mom....
*friend is...
*likes listen to...
*favorite ...
*and black...
- sofia dimas .
My character is Emma, who is a girl, que is 17 years old,she lives in Madrid,she was born in Barcelona,she lives with her mom and her brother. Her best friene is Farrok,she likes listen to trap,reggaeton,pop and English music and her favorite colors are white,pink and black.
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my character is meralyn, she is 25 years old, she loves write a beutiful storys an she works in a office very bored she been born at united states, she writes 12 storys.
ResponderEliminarshe went through a very hard stage of depression,
but he recovered and he saw the nice side of life, she has a lot of friends, she has a trhee dogs and two cats she loves animals is her life the
The name of the last story he wrote is the beyond , this story is very beutiful, her biggest dream is to be a writer, she loves sushi and she works from 6 to 7, she loves go to the gym,
I hope her dreams come true
MARIA FERNANDA ESPAÑA
My*
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She loves writing beautiful* stories*
she works in a very boring office*
She was born in the United States*
She got better*
The nice side of life. She has a lot of friends, 3 dogs and 3 cats. She loves animals in her life...
"Beyond". This story is...
beautiful *
She loves to* go to the gym...
(period at the end)
Well done, María Fernanda. Check the comments and work on the corrections, please.
ARIANNA COLLAZO CORDOBA
ResponderEliminarMy character is called Rita, she is 20 year old and lives in Canada. She is studying to be astronomy because she likes the universe very much.
She lives with her mom, dad, her pets and their names are Honey a hamster and Night a puppy. Rita likes winter because she likes to make snowmen.
Saturday and Sunday she goes to the park to walk his puppy Night, prefers to play with Honey and Night than to chat with friends.
After university, Rita goes to the gym and takes swimming lessons on weekends for two hours. Someday she wants to go to work at NASA because she wants to travel to the moon.
20 years* old
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Honey, a hamster, and Night, a puppy.
On Saturdays and Sundays...
She prefers playing with puppy and night than chatting...
Very good job, way to go!
My character is Andark he is a singer now he is composing a song for the next week, he is 26 years old, he likes to play with his dog also he is a supervillain now he is looking for his enemy the captain America, he comes from an unknown town but the only thing that the world knows is that he was born in Germany but nobody knows his exactly location but I know him. He achieved all his goals but he only miss one that's find the Captain America
ResponderEliminar... he likes to play with his dog. Also, he is a supervillain; now, he is looking for...
EliminarHe has* achieved all his goals, but he only misses* one: to find the captain America.
Very well done. Check out the comments and work on the corrections, please.
Good afternoon teacher this is my job.
ResponderEliminarMy character is called Paul, he is an extrovert guy of 25 years of age who likes to skate, ride a bike and play soccer, usually during the week he gets up at 6 a.m. to go to university he is studying last semester of architecture he goes out to at 3 o'clock in the afternoon to study, when he does not meet his girlfriend, he goes to the gym to practice an hour later, he goes to his house to do university work on his thesis, a light dinner, he watches some of his TV shows and he sleeps to rest at 11 pm usually.
On weekends he goes out to rumbar with his girlfriend, goes to the movies and practices some of his favorite sports or just rests.
he goes out to*(delete)
Eliminarhe goes to the gymbto practice. An hour later, he goes home to do the university assignments.
Good job, Nelson. Way to go!
Check comments, please.
Angie Nicolle Roa Zambrano
ResponderEliminarMy charter is called Micaela, but she prefers that the people say her Mica. She has 19 years old, she is from Colombia and she is studying law at the university.She like to read and write poems. But not only that, she also likes to dance and is very good doing it. She is very smart and always tried to be best in her university and in her life.
She doesn't have a lot of friends, but she knows that she can trust them fully. They are called Izma, Susan, Thina and Santi.
Mica, also has a pet, called Misu. They are inseparable, and it will be very painful for Mica when he is left in this world.
Her favorite color is white, but she prefers black clothes. She like all kinds of music, but the only one that she can bear is classic music.
Her favorite food is salmon, or maybe the empanada with a lot of aji and guacamole.
She is very healthy and every weekend she goes out to do exercise in the park near her house.
The things in her family are not very stable, her parents almost don't care about her and she spent most of her life alone.
Anyway, she is happy and doesn't cause any problems for her parents to be absent.
In her free time she prefers to sleep, spend time with her friends or be with her cat.
In short she have a happy life.
Character*
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She is*19 years old
She likes* to read
... and is very good at it
always tries* to be the* best
it will be very painful for Mica when he leaves this world
She likes* all kinds of music
She spents*
...any problem to*his parents for being absent
she prefers sleeping, spending time with friends or being with her cat.
she has* a happy life
Very well done, Angie. Way to go! Check out the comments, please.
My character is Emma, she lives in Bogota. She has 19 yers old. She studies medicine in Nacionals university.She speaks French, and British English. She likes listen English music,play with her friends, and play the guitar.She loves the animals, actually she has a little cat ,is beautiful. She doesnt like reggueton music,in her pinion that music is ugly and she doesnt tolerate it.
ResponderEliminarShe studies medicine because want to help the kids that dont have recourses.She has got two brothers , she doesnt tolerate them, she says that they are insorpotable.And they cant get Emma consentrate when she do her homeworks. In her free time she goes to eat ice crem with her fiends. After school she works in a hospital, she is a nurse, but when she finished to study medicice, in the hospital she is going to be a doctor. she works until 2 p.m. And she go to the university at 8 a.m. When she want to relax she see netflix series, and when she has to study for a test or exam she goes to a friend house.
when she go to her grandmothers house, she do a lot exercise. And she gives some presents to the kids or sometimes in Bogota she hepls or give money to the Venezuela people.
My character is Emma, she lives in Bogota. She has 19 -years- old. She studies medicine in Nacionals university. She speaks French, and British English. She likes -to listen- English music, play with her friends, and play the guitar. She loves the animals, actually she has a little cat, is beautiful. She -doesn't- like
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-opinion- that music is ugly and she doesn't tolerate it.
She studies medicine because -she- want to help the kids that -don't- have -resources-. She has got two brothers, she doesn't tolerate them, she says that they are
-unbearable-. And they
-can't- get Emma
-concentrate- when she
-does- her homeworks.
In her free time she goes to eat -icecream- with her -friends-. After school, she works in a hospital, she is a nurse, but when she finished -studying
-medicine, in the hospital she is going to be a doctor.
she works until 2 p.m. And she -goes- to the university at 8 a.m. When she -wants- to relax she see -Netflix- series, and when she has to study for a test or exam she goes to a -friend's- house.
-When- she -goes- to her
-grandmother's- house, she -does- a lot exercise.
Also she gives some presents to the kids-,- or sometimes in Bogota she
-helps- or give money to the -Venezuelan- people.
Corrected by Angie Nicolle Roa Zambrano
She is* 19 years old
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She loves the*(delete) animals
She wants to help the kids
When she finishes the university, she will be a doctor
She goes to the university at 8
She watches Netflix series.
She goes to a friend's house.
Very well done! Check Angie's comments and mine, please.
my character is called elsa and her last name is capunta also she live in Bogotá, she like to read books about suspence and comedy. Elsa is 30 years old and she live with her dad, her mom and her little sister that is only seven years old also she have a cat called felix. she doesn't like to see to much movies because she prefier to go out to the mall.
ResponderEliminarElsa favourite dish is the pasta and the nutella, her favourite drink is the tea. on the weakdays she works in a radio station like a comedian from 5:00 am to 5:00 pm and in the weekends she goes to cinema or see a movie with felix.
My*
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Capunta*
She lives* in Bogotá
She likes* to read
Suspense*
She has*
She* doesn't like to...
So many* movies
She prefers* going out
Elsa's favourite dish is the*(delete) pasta.
the*(delete) tea.
On* weekdays
As* a comedian
On the weekends she goes to the* cinema or watch a movie with Felix*
Check comments and work on the corrections, please.
My character lives in Tokyo his name is Kaneki San, he is 14 years old.
ResponderEliminarHe studies in afternoon. His matter favorite is arts. I loves music and his genders favorites is k-pop and electronic, his DJ favorite is Alan Walker and his song favorite is Force and the band favorite of k-pop is BTS and song favorite is Idol.In his free time reads comics, draw anime and listen to music. He likes food.His favorite food sushi,his favorite color is black and his favorite sport is voleyball. On the sundays plays videogames. He doesn't go to the shopping
HE loves
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In the afternoon
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He loves music and his favorite genres are
His favorite dj/his favorite song/his favorite band
In his free time, he reads
On Sundays, he plays videogames. He doesn't go shopping.
Check the comments and work on the corrections, please
My character lives in London,her name is Emma.She likes play volleyball.Emma is 18 years old and she live alone.
ResponderEliminarShe doesn't like eat vegetables.
She likes the pop and electrónica.
She studies in University of London.
My character lives in London, her name is Emma.She likes play volleyball. Emma is 18 years old and she lives alone. She doesn't like eat vegetables. She likes poppand electronic music. She studies in a university of London
EliminarMaria Jose Pulido Lopez
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Well done; rather short but it's ok.
Check María José's comments and mine as well.
Work on corrections, please.
Sebastian:
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mike-Mike
eat-eating
go-goes
weekend-weekends